I would be happy if someone likes this evening look. Please write comments. Of course, I will not fix this rendering any more, but for future work I will need your opinion very much.

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  1. bdomiczek
    bdomiczek says:

    Hi Eduard. I like your work and the atmosphere you created. Since you are asking about the comments, I can write you some issues that meet my eye.
    1. The right side of the image. There are bottoms of the trees visible at the steep slope. Furthermore, this area seems to be blurred and because it’s relatively bright, it distracts from the center of the image.
    2. I don’t know if you applied some filter to the image but there are some horizontal strips that look like the newspaper print. Especially visible over the darker areas.
    3. I am kind of missing a bit of the dark foreground in the composition.

    • Eduard Ksenofontov
      Eduard Ksenofontov says:

      Hello bdomiczek!
      Thank you for your feedback and correct comments. Now I also see these shortcomings. I think this is affected by the lack of experience in such scenes. In my next works, I will definitely take this into account. If I can not manage, I’ll ask from you 😉 Thank you.

  2. Bartosz Domiczek
    Bartosz Domiczek says:

    Hi Eduard. I like your work and the atmosphere you created. Since you are asking about the comments, I can write you some issues that meet my eye.
    1. The right side of the image. There are bottoms of the trees visible at the steep slope. Furthermore, this area seems to be blurred and because it’s relatively bright, it distracts from the center of the image.
    2. I don’t know if you applied some filter to the image but there are some horizontal strips that look like the newspaper print. Especially visible over the darker areas.
    3. I am kind of missing a bit of the dark foreground in the composition.

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