Office Atrium, Dublin

[lgradzki]

concept image of office space completed recently, let's bash it!
LG

[nic]

looks good except for that 'arch vis foreground' woman

[bakbek]

Hey nic, please tell us more Story here! what, why, when, how...

[lasse1309]

i love images where you can't tell at first glance how tey where made, which renderer used, how much post (or even entirely painted) etc.

this one looks fine

@nic: what about that woman?

regards
lasse

[oriuken]

Really nice job!
But here's my bash..
The reflection of the glass of the railings is a bit too strong, and not too clear the fresnel.
I'd work a little on the colors, to attract the attention to 1 or 2 points, a bit like luxigon.
I'd also try something to intensify the depth of the perspective. Maybe you need to try with a diferent background.
You can check "The Hall" from Juan Altieri.
I agree with Lasse, and like to know about those things we can't tell..
Cheers!

[nic]

ok as far as the woman i think the placement takes away from the overall image and sticks out - there is plenty going on in the image in the background and seeing as though its a one point perspective the woman throws the image off balance (for me) and feels a bit forced. I generally feel that less people is more when doing arch vis when you look at the image as a whole piece.

putting in 'more people - more people!' is a general directive / cry from architects who generally feel the need for 'a populated image' 'bring it alive' etc.

i don't see that many architectural photography with weird people hanging around latently in the foreground...then again you may not be aiming for photography so thats fine.

its such a tiny tiny niggling critique tbh as the rest is excellent...

[lgradzki]

yep, nic is totally right, she is ruining the composition. I didn't put enough attention to her earlier, but it is good to have another look after a break and judge again.
Cheers,
LG

[Frontop]

Impressive! I'll like it better if the light is set a little dark.