Winter Bathroom

[Connor]

Hey guys this is my first post on the forum and my first interior scene. Original design was by "Karol" However I changed it for my own likings.

Programs used: Cinema 4D + Standard Render + Photoshop for post work.

Main Shot:

Close Up:

Sink:

Toilet:

Enjoy,
Connor E. - http://imkonnr.deviantart.com/

[exor]

Very good! Nice to see some stuff with cinema here!!

cheers, benni

[gurgur]

Very good! Nice to see some stuff with cinema here!!

cheers, benni

I agree. nice work and nice to see more c4d users.

[donalos]

Very nice work, lovely ambiance.

slightly strange reflection on the toilet top, looks like some trees or something, can't work it out..

#nitpicking

[glimpse]

In this case it looks really nice, Though if you want to get some critics, Connor, try to improve a bit the the concrete look, maybe adding the reflactivity roughtnes, specular..anything, even bit harder bump, to simulate the surface properties, closer to 'real thnig'. Now it's bit muddy..at least in my eyes.

Best thing is to google uo some photo references if you try to look closely at let's say 100 photos, You'll get idead where to step, in what direction =) just abserve! - it's part of the process..

Next is personal & subjective opinion - if I were You I would add vigneting, not much, but at least a bit to spice the shot abit =)

Other tan that, i love these shots of minimal space =)

Glimps

[Connor]

Very nice work, lovely ambiance.

slightly strange reflection on the toilet top, looks like some trees or something, can't work it out..

#nitpicking

Yep that's trees, They're reflecting from the HDRI you just can't see the trees because of the glow coming from the window, Cheers.

[Connor]

In this case it looks really nice, Though if you want to get some critics, Connor, try to improve a bit the the concrete look, maybe adding the reflactivity roughtnes, specular..anything, even bit harder bump, to simulate the surface properties, closer to 'real thnig'. Now it's bit muddy..at least in my eyes.

Best thing is to google uo some photo references if you try to look closely at let's say 100 photos, You'll get idead where to step, in what direction =) just abserve! - it's part of the process..

Next is personal & subjective opinion - if I were You I would add vigneting, not much, but at least a bit to spice the shot abit =)

Other tan that, i love these shots of minimal space =)

Glimps

I have to say I totaly agree with the concrete. I don't know why I didn't spend more time on it. The wood texture is multilayerd with reflection, specular, bump maps etc. yet with the concreate I think all I did was colour and bump. Cheers for the crit next time I will definatly take more time and care into this.