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06-22-2011 09:33 PM
# ADS
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Senior Member
Mina! Good to see you here, my friend.
Road could use some work, especially some curb detailing, I think it would make for a stronger foreground. Perhaps if you put some foliage/accessories on the other side of the street, where the camera is? The tree branch on the top right helps, but some more foreground elements would help the context, I think.
Tiling in the bricks isn't that noticeable, but see if you can blend two slightly altered brick maps together with a larger blend map (I don't know if SketchUp supports multiple UV sets or what, hopefully someone with more SketchUp experience can help you there...).
Otherwise, it would help if the lighting had more direction, especially over the trees, people, foliage, etc. Perhaps switching up the sky to something that's more gradient-like?
Keep it up!
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Junior Member
Tom, good to see you here too, especially as Mr. Senior member... Great work by the way.
Thanks buddy, I do need to work on the foreground + the sidewalk (needs more texture, its pale at the moment)
I will try using different brick textures and mixing them up, will let you know how it turns out...
I was short in time to finish the rendering before printing, but will try to fix it in general.
What about the reflection? Do you think its too reflective? Do i need to tone it down a little.
ps you have to come to montreal, before leaving your motherland...
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